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An OK idea, but could've used some improvement still. Adding a play button in the beginning and a stop at the end would have been nice. Also, the lines were hard to hear at times, but you already know that. As for graphics and animation, they could be better, but we all learn as we go.

Twoputridpeople responds:

Yea, I've got a bit of an accent that people aren't use to and as I talk I slowly start speaking less english and more gibberish so im not good at voice acting. The story was a bit rushed and a little confusing because I didn't emphasize the light source is what was keeping him awaking but other than that im proud of it :)

Nice job!

The video quality was good, and so was the animation. One thing that you could've still done was lower the sound quality in exchange for some video improvement. I think it was unnecessary to maintain the song on almost full bitrate. Also, please don't put spoilers on your author's notes... It's not a smart move. :P Still, keep going!

Montycarlo responds:

The song only added about 500kbs, so we thought that'd be ok, I hate bad bitrate songs...
I won't put spoilers anyware anymore, thanks!

Thanks for your review!

Nice idea!

At least it was somehow original. I still would recommend you to check the scaling of your movie... I could see everything I wasn't supposed to see and that was really disturbing...

cheftorte responds:

There was a problem with the initial movie dimensions when I first uploaded it. I noticed it first thing after submission, but it took me a few minutes to fix.

Few beginner- like flaws, but great!

The beginning was quite tendious and long, as well as pretty boring, but if you saw it through it really was worth it. Being your first flash, this is definately the better kind. Original ideas were good, but some things seemed to go on too long. Try making your animations a little more dynamic in the future so that it won't get annoying for the viewer. All in all, a great start, since you actually put some effort into it. :)

Silveraxe responds:

Ok!
The next time i'll use less slowmotion!^^

Thanks for The review!^^

This is like a one legged man

It's slow, might be funny to watch for a while, but in the end it turns sad anyways. I liked your attempt to make this funny but I couldn't help recognizing a VERY old Donald Duck- cartoon joke at the beginning. That would've been fine with some self irony, but now it just seemed like trying to walk away with someone elses ideas. Correct me if I'm wrong, in that case, nice work with that one. The graphics were far from good, but you'll get there finally if you train enough. :)
The animation and all the action were a bit too slow-going. You should try pacing them up a bit. With zooming, try using the "ease"- option in the properties to make it look faster. As for sounds, nothing special here, but at least sounds exist.

I might be a little rough here, but I just had a week full of bad nights and a high fever...

Anyways, a good start!

MrRogersColostomyBag responds:

Well I am glad you can have a moment to lament on your childhood memories from this flash, I am not an artist this was a quick experiment and well I have another flash coming so hopefully you can review it again maybe you can link to another infantile cartoon, thanks for the criticism stranger

Candle Twin

Yep, artistic at least. It had something dreamlike in it, but it turned out to be more like a nightmare. If you just had some more surprising elements included or some kind of a story or a plot, then it could be better. This just screams Salad Fingers, by the way.
Anyways, a pretty decent flash, but needs something to hold the viewer's attention through it all.
Try making it more interesting.
3/5

qwertyporst responds:

"Artistic" was indeed a bit of what I was going for. I meant it to be slightly laid back and dreamy; pointless, not too energetic, but soothing. I made the first bits of it for my own relaxation, then it just kept expanding. Over the summer I created tons of small clips of flash animation which never got anywhere. This one somehow seemed special.. so I fed it well, kept it in good sun, and it's grown up to this. I really just want it to be a yellow light that pours all over you and calms you when you're tired.

-_-'

How does a ball of fire create a shadow when it approaches something? Oh well... it was okay... The graphics were okay... the animation was okay... the music was... not so okay... anyways, okay.

BellClock responds:

It's not a fireball, it was blue.. I dont know what that is. A DBZ like energy sphere or whatever? I gave it a shadow for that little extra. Also because I wanted to so hah.
Kthx

Great!

I liked that random and sensless style of yours, since it wasn't random, sensless AND badly done!

I'm not sure if the Lock Legion requires using computer-made robo-voices, but still your voiceacting was good!^.^

It was so weird it became funny!
Keep it up! :)

Wonchop responds:

Well, you can't really call it an unrehearsed recording if you type everything out now ;)

Wow... there's something wrong with me...

I actually LIKED a lock/clock/cock/glock- movie! Usually, they all follow the same weird ready-made way, but this was really original in many ways! I'd like to see more movies of this quality from the different groups/legions out there! Nice work!

Gregosan responds:

Thanks for your support!

Lovely Randomness...

Very nice! I enjoyed it!It was good, but not perfect...The lines could have been smoother and the "Vote 5" in the end was just sad... and I think its just my opinion, but the lines could have formed something more often.Otherwise, very good!

n00b-l0s3r responds:

I wasn't really MEANING the VOTE 5 thing... it was just for kicks but I still believe this will pass seeing that my previous one passed too.

Nah, I prefer 20 smoothing. Those lines are just stubborn here but there are more shapes and forms you can see in my other submission!

The Definition Of A Cynic: Someone who smells the scent of flowers and wonders where the cascet is...

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