Tuovila's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A moths Life]

An OK idea, but could've used some improvement still. Adding a play button in the beginning and a stop at the end would have been nice. Also, the lines were hard to hear at times, but you already know that. As for graphics and animation, they could be better, but we all learn as we go.

Twoputridpeople responds:

Yea, I've got a bit of an accent that people aren't use to and as I talk I slowly start speaking less english and more gibberish so im not good at voice acting. The story was a bit rushed and a little confusing because I didn't emphasize the light source is what was keeping him awaking but other than that im proud of it :)

[Bad Baby]

Omituista.

I think this was cross the line and the point where you just can't really describe what you just saw. Great animating, of course, as well as using Kusela and Puppe - Naurava Kulkuri as the background music. Although I would've never thought you could twist it around to sound like that... Could you by any chance send it to me? I only have the original casette recording, and that "remix" would be a nice little twist. Please PM me if it's not too much trouble. Anyhow, nice work!

[Gorin]

I was starting to like it...

...And then it was all over! It needs some kind of a conclusion. Otherwise it's all good.

[Zelda: The False Princess]

Nice idea!

At least it was somehow original. I still would recommend you to check the scaling of your movie... I could see everything I wasn't supposed to see and that was really disturbing...

cheftorte responds:

There was a problem with the initial movie dimensions when I first uploaded it. I noticed it first thing after submission, but it took me a few minutes to fix.

[The Greyhound]

This was really good.

No, seriously, I mean it! Overall, very nice. But you forgot just one very basic thing, a preloader. This is a large file and it takes a long time for it to load, I had to stop it three times because it jammed while loading, and I have a 1-meg- connection. You could also think again about some of the sounds, since there are better available all around the web. Still, a story well told. 5/5

[Billy Monks Cornucopia]

And they say white people can't dance...

Anyhow, this is definately not the place for video-only material, since the emphasis is on Flash. Put it up on Youtube, that'll get you audience.

[New Super Mario World 1]

Few beginner- like flaws, but great!

The beginning was quite tendious and long, as well as pretty boring, but if you saw it through it really was worth it. Being your first flash, this is definately the better kind. Original ideas were good, but some things seemed to go on too long. Try making your animations a little more dynamic in the future so that it won't get annoying for the viewer. All in all, a great start, since you actually put some effort into it. :)

Silveraxe responds:

Ok!
The next time i'll use less slowmotion!^^

Thanks for The review!^^

[No sleep]

This is like a one legged man

It's slow, might be funny to watch for a while, but in the end it turns sad anyways. I liked your attempt to make this funny but I couldn't help recognizing a VERY old Donald Duck- cartoon joke at the beginning. That would've been fine with some self irony, but now it just seemed like trying to walk away with someone elses ideas. Correct me if I'm wrong, in that case, nice work with that one. The graphics were far from good, but you'll get there finally if you train enough. :)
The animation and all the action were a bit too slow-going. You should try pacing them up a bit. With zooming, try using the "ease"- option in the properties to make it look faster. As for sounds, nothing special here, but at least sounds exist.

I might be a little rough here, but I just had a week full of bad nights and a high fever...

Anyways, a good start!

MrRogersColostomyBag responds:

Well I am glad you can have a moment to lament on your childhood memories from this flash, I am not an artist this was a quick experiment and well I have another flash coming so hopefully you can review it again maybe you can link to another infantile cartoon, thanks for the criticism stranger