An OK idea, but could've used some improvement still. Adding a play button in the beginning and a stop at the end would have been nice. Also, the lines were hard to hear at times, but you already know that. As for graphics and animation, they could be better, but we all learn as we go.
Yea, I've got a bit of an accent that people aren't use to and as I talk I slowly start speaking less english and more gibberish so im not good at voice acting. The story was a bit rushed and a little confusing because I didn't emphasize the light source is what was keeping him awaking but other than that im proud of it :)
I think this was cross the line and the point where you just can't really describe what you just saw. Great animating, of course, as well as using Kusela and Puppe - Naurava Kulkuri as the background music. Although I would've never thought you could twist it around to sound like that... Could you by any chance send it to me? I only have the original casette recording, and that "remix" would be a nice little twist. Please PM me if it's not too much trouble. Anyhow, nice work!
The video quality was good, and so was the animation. One thing that you could've still done was lower the sound quality in exchange for some video improvement. I think it was unnecessary to maintain the song on almost full bitrate. Also, please don't put spoilers on your author's notes... It's not a smart move. :P Still, keep going!
The song only added about 500kbs, so we thought that'd be ok, I hate bad bitrate songs...
I won't put spoilers anyware anymore, thanks!
Thanks for your review!
I was starting to like it...
...And then it was all over! It needs some kind of a conclusion. Otherwise it's all good.
At least it was somehow original. I still would recommend you to check the scaling of your movie... I could see everything I wasn't supposed to see and that was really disturbing...
There was a problem with the initial movie dimensions when I first uploaded it. I noticed it first thing after submission, but it took me a few minutes to fix.
Very very nice.
This was both informative and entertaining, good job! I just wish my school allowed for more stuff like this...
This was really good.
No, seriously, I mean it! Overall, very nice. But you forgot just one very basic thing, a preloader. This is a large file and it takes a long time for it to load, I had to stop it three times because it jammed while loading, and I have a 1-meg- connection. You could also think again about some of the sounds, since there are better available all around the web. Still, a story well told. 5/5
This is nothing out of ordinary, since there are a dozen other I-have-superpowers-but-I-don't -know-who-I-am-or-where-I-come -from- stories. Still, you have most of the basics covered pretty nicely.
Try some shading on your characters, makes them look better.
Make sure your spelling is correct, there were lots of typos there.
See to the sounds too.
Also, the seriousness of it all was a bit humorous, was it supposed to be?
Once you get the grip of things I'd say you have lots of potential to put into practice. This was not a bad start at all, but you have a long way to go. PM me once the next part is out if you see fit.
I didnt notist the spelling mistakes, I'll see to the sound next time. Erm... it wasn't suppose to be humorous, oh well.
And they say white people can't dance...
Anyhow, this is definately not the place for video-only material, since the emphasis is on Flash. Put it up on Youtube, that'll get you audience.
Few beginner- like flaws, but great!
The beginning was quite tendious and long, as well as pretty boring, but if you saw it through it really was worth it. Being your first flash, this is definately the better kind. Original ideas were good, but some things seemed to go on too long. Try making your animations a little more dynamic in the future so that it won't get annoying for the viewer. All in all, a great start, since you actually put some effort into it. :)
The next time i'll use less slowmotion!^^
Thanks for The review!^^
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