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[Twindle Can]

Candle Twin

Yep, artistic at least. It had something dreamlike in it, but it turned out to be more like a nightmare. If you just had some more surprising elements included or some kind of a story or a plot, then it could be better. This just screams Salad Fingers, by the way.
Anyways, a pretty decent flash, but needs something to hold the viewer's attention through it all.
Try making it more interesting.
3/5

qwertyporst responds:

"Artistic" was indeed a bit of what I was going for. I meant it to be slightly laid back and dreamy; pointless, not too energetic, but soothing. I made the first bits of it for my own relaxation, then it just kept expanding. Over the summer I created tons of small clips of flash animation which never got anywhere. This one somehow seemed special.. so I fed it well, kept it in good sun, and it's grown up to this. I really just want it to be a yellow light that pours all over you and calms you when you're tired.

[Sankari]

It was pretty okay.

Your drawings were good, but you need to do something about the voice acting. It's not done with the excitement it could have been, especially since the grammar was well proper enough for some feeling to put in it too. If someone screams, they don't do it with a silent weep, but at least have that power and shock present in some way. Being Finnish I understand this, however, just wanted to point something out. :)

As for animation, it's okay considering the time spent on it.
Overall, good, but somewhat insecure and rushed, an update would be great on the audio field. Keep going!

[WTAHM Teaser]

I liked it a bit.

The music was the best part. Everything else was kinda.. well.. usual. :D
Nothing too new, but still interesting. You get a well-earned 3!

[fbf bollocks]

-_-'

How does a ball of fire create a shadow when it approaches something? Oh well... it was okay... The graphics were okay... the animation was okay... the music was... not so okay... anyways, okay.

BellClock responds:

It's not a fireball, it was blue.. I dont know what that is. A DBZ like energy sphere or whatever? I gave it a shadow for that little extra. Also because I wanted to so hah.
Kthx

[Sun&Moon Conversation 2]

That was f__kin' weird!

...and that's pretty much the only reason I didn't blam it :D You could try improve the sounds next time, for the speech was really messed at some points... I bet this didn't really take much effort or time to make. Still, there was that special something originality that saved it.

[kUchiLLo mArAviLLa]

Yep!

Copy-paste anything Obi-WanKenobi just said. I liked it. Magnifico or something like that... :)

[Mean Shepherds - Part#4]

Weird...

...so very weird. But I liked it. Weird... did I mention it was weird?
...weird.

...so very weird...

[A Short Litle Story]

This is your first submission?!

Well, good job then!:) Nice to know someone actually does something more than sticks or clocks as their first-born... It could of course have been better, but I liked it alright. Keep it up.

[LL-Cloudlock Shorts #1]

Great!

I liked that random and sensless style of yours, since it wasn't random, sensless AND badly done!

I'm not sure if the Lock Legion requires using computer-made robo-voices, but still your voiceacting was good!^.^

It was so weird it became funny!
Keep it up! :)

Wonchop responds:

Well, you can't really call it an unrehearsed recording if you type everything out now ;)

[Cloud's adventure]

Well...umm...

This is-ah... pretty nice for a first flash.

I could see some similarities with the style of LegendaryFrog, but that's not the poin here. The overall graphics were something between decent and nice, since the colours started to look annoying at certain spots.

As for style... it was a bit unfinished and hard to follow.

The sounds were good, but some more sound effeckts wouldn't have hurt. The only minus with sound was that it was really badly if at all compressed and increased the file alot.

Violence... well, the fight scenes were pretty decent. But I was happily suprised that the movements in the Snorlax- fight.
Nice job there.

The biggest downside of it all was that the jokes didn't get to me.
I didn't really laugh at single one! So think them trough a bit next time.