Score: 6

"Nice job!"

submission: Klaymo: CTF

date: September 25, 2007

The video quality was good, and so was the animation. One thing that you could've still done was lower the sound quality in exchange for some video improvement. I think it was unnecessary to maintain the song on almost full bitrate. Also, please don't put spoilers on your author's notes... It's not a smart move. :P Still, keep going!

Score: 6

"Nice idea!"

submission: Zelda: The False Princess

date: June 6, 2007

At least it was somehow original. I still would recommend you to check the scaling of your movie... I could see everything I wasn't supposed to see and that was really disturbing...

Score: 4

"Promising"

submission: Zekoma: Part One

date: March 18, 2007

This is nothing out of ordinary, since there are a dozen other I-have-superpowers-but-I-don't -know-who-I-am-or-where-I-come -from- stories. Still, you have most of the basics covered pretty nicely.
Try some shading on your characters, makes them look better.
Make sure your spelling is correct, there were lots of typos there.
See to the sounds too.
Also, the seriousness of it all was a bit humorous, was it supposed to be?

Once you get the grip of things I'd say you have lots of potential to put into practice. This was not a bad start at all, but you have a long way to go. PM me once the next part is out if you see fit.

Score: 10

"Few beginner- like flaws, but great!"

submission: New Super Mario World 1

date: September 26, 2006

The beginning was quite tendious and long, as well as pretty boring, but if you saw it through it really was worth it. Being your first flash, this is definately the better kind. Original ideas were good, but some things seemed to go on too long. Try making your animations a little more dynamic in the future so that it won't get annoying for the viewer. All in all, a great start, since you actually put some effort into it. :)

Score: 3

"This is like a one legged man"

submission: No sleep

date: September 7, 2006

It's slow, might be funny to watch for a while, but in the end it turns sad anyways. I liked your attempt to make this funny but I couldn't help recognizing a VERY old Donald Duck- cartoon joke at the beginning. That would've been fine with some self irony, but now it just seemed like trying to walk away with someone elses ideas. Correct me if I'm wrong, in that case, nice work with that one. The graphics were far from good, but you'll get there finally if you train enough. :)
The animation and all the action were a bit too slow-going. You should try pacing them up a bit. With zooming, try using the "ease"- option in the properties to make it look faster. As for sounds, nothing special here, but at least sounds exist.

I might be a little rough here, but I just had a week full of bad nights and a high fever...

Anyways, a good start!

Score: 6

"Candle Twin"

submission: Twindle Can

date: August 24, 2006

Yep, artistic at least. It had something dreamlike in it, but it turned out to be more like a nightmare. If you just had some more surprising elements included or some kind of a story or a plot, then it could be better. This just screams Salad Fingers, by the way.
Anyways, a pretty decent flash, but needs something to hold the viewer's attention through it all.
Try making it more interesting.
3/5

Score: 2

"-_-'"

submission: fbf bollocks

date: October 14, 2005

How does a ball of fire create a shadow when it approaches something? Oh well... it was okay... The graphics were okay... the animation was okay... the music was... not so okay... anyways, okay.

Score: 4

"Nothing interesting really"

submission: 2D 3D Dudes presentation

date: September 23, 2005

You've got something worth making in your hands, but I've got to admit it was pretty boring...especially without sounds or music. You use camera movements way too much and therefore the viewer gets bored. Don't overdo them. Fix these little problems and it just might work! :)

Score: 7

"Weird..."

submission: Mean Shepherds - Part#4

date: September 15, 2005

...so very weird. But I liked it. Weird... did I mention it was weird?
...weird.

...so very weird...

Score: 7

"An all-right game"

submission: Base Defence 2 Monster

date: September 15, 2005

The graphics were nice along with the sounds and gameplay, and it even run at a decent speed on my old 'n slow computer.

Still there was something that bothered me... was that lined area supposed to be a scripted camera? Cause if it was, it damn sure didn't work properly on me...