Score: 10

"Omituista."

submission: Bad Baby

date: May 14, 2008

I think this was cross the line and the point where you just can't really describe what you just saw. Great animating, of course, as well as using Kusela and Puppe - Naurava Kulkuri as the background music. Although I would've never thought you could twist it around to sound like that... Could you by any chance send it to me? I only have the original casette recording, and that "remix" would be a nice little twist. Please PM me if it's not too much trouble. Anyhow, nice work!

Score: 6

"Nice job!"

submission: Klaymo: CTF

date: September 25, 2007

The video quality was good, and so was the animation. One thing that you could've still done was lower the sound quality in exchange for some video improvement. I think it was unnecessary to maintain the song on almost full bitrate. Also, please don't put spoilers on your author's notes... It's not a smart move. :P Still, keep going!

Score: 6

"I was starting to like it..."

submission: Gorin

date: June 7, 2007

...And then it was all over! It needs some kind of a conclusion. Otherwise it's all good.

Score: 6

"Nice idea!"

submission: Zelda: The False Princess

date: June 6, 2007

At least it was somehow original. I still would recommend you to check the scaling of your movie... I could see everything I wasn't supposed to see and that was really disturbing...

Score: 9

"Very very nice."

submission: Shadows....

date: April 2, 2007

This was both informative and entertaining, good job! I just wish my school allowed for more stuff like this...

Score: 9

"This was really good."

submission: The Greyhound

date: March 27, 2007

No, seriously, I mean it! Overall, very nice. But you forgot just one very basic thing, a preloader. This is a large file and it takes a long time for it to load, I had to stop it three times because it jammed while loading, and I have a 1-meg- connection. You could also think again about some of the sounds, since there are better available all around the web. Still, a story well told. 5/5

Score: 4

"Promising"

submission: Zekoma: Part One

date: March 18, 2007

This is nothing out of ordinary, since there are a dozen other I-have-superpowers-but-I-don't -know-who-I-am-or-where-I-come -from- stories. Still, you have most of the basics covered pretty nicely.
Try some shading on your characters, makes them look better.
Make sure your spelling is correct, there were lots of typos there.
See to the sounds too.
Also, the seriousness of it all was a bit humorous, was it supposed to be?

Once you get the grip of things I'd say you have lots of potential to put into practice. This was not a bad start at all, but you have a long way to go. PM me once the next part is out if you see fit.

Score: 0

"And they say white people can't dance..."

submission: Billy Monks Cornucopia

date: September 29, 2006

Anyhow, this is definately not the place for video-only material, since the emphasis is on Flash. Put it up on Youtube, that'll get you audience.

Score: 10

"Few beginner- like flaws, but great!"

submission: New Super Mario World 1

date: September 26, 2006

The beginning was quite tendious and long, as well as pretty boring, but if you saw it through it really was worth it. Being your first flash, this is definately the better kind. Original ideas were good, but some things seemed to go on too long. Try making your animations a little more dynamic in the future so that it won't get annoying for the viewer. All in all, a great start, since you actually put some effort into it. :)

Score: 3

"This is like a one legged man"

submission: No sleep

date: September 7, 2006

It's slow, might be funny to watch for a while, but in the end it turns sad anyways. I liked your attempt to make this funny but I couldn't help recognizing a VERY old Donald Duck- cartoon joke at the beginning. That would've been fine with some self irony, but now it just seemed like trying to walk away with someone elses ideas. Correct me if I'm wrong, in that case, nice work with that one. The graphics were far from good, but you'll get there finally if you train enough. :)
The animation and all the action were a bit too slow-going. You should try pacing them up a bit. With zooming, try using the "ease"- option in the properties to make it look faster. As for sounds, nothing special here, but at least sounds exist.

I might be a little rough here, but I just had a week full of bad nights and a high fever...

Anyways, a good start!